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March 2009 
Please help, Is this really love??!!!
Daniel: Devotee and Mystic
Its amazing,
the beautiful love.
I can't think,
Searingly intense.
my senses overwhelmed,
my feelings sparked into extasy,
your eyes bring me to bliss,
your touch...
It makes me forget it all.
I could caress for an eternity,
kiss every inch,
your rain makes me vibrant,
your breath brings coolness.
Tingling and lighting my senses,
I'm just beholding you;
I've forgotten who I am,
I'm just flooded,
Tears trickling,
love from my heart saturates me,
I want to be close,
lose myself in you.
How I love you,
I adore you,
I can't stand the seperation at times,
I call your name,
Again and again.
begging you to touch me,
You're here.
I feel you.
closer than close.
I feel because I am,
You gave of yourself,
what I have is yours.
I want to give.
I want to love.
and to be loved.
Can I be with you?
Can we be one?
I love you, I cherish you, beloved-
My Father
My lover
My family
My self
It's all you.
Just you.
Only you.
Only love.
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well, dan, one thing I can say for sure…it is definitely PASSION!!! I don't know about the love part…depends on how it turns out, whether or not you make a DECISION to commit to one another to walk through this life together as ONE>..to build a life together, giving all you have to each other and commitment to add to one anothers growth and to Become ONE as soulmates till 120, working and growing together…NO?? but you got a great start~~ go for it~if you haven't already~
Toda Raba Chavera,
The poem is about both God and a girl/s, not really one girl in particular. God is the primary theme. Soulmates die, God always lives, He's all that matters in the end. Notice that I said, “My Father.” A girl can never satisfy me, I learned that the hard way. I could pick an ideal girl, but she would fall way short of what I'm looking for, which is nothing less than enlightenment. To come face to face with God HimSelf, to know for a fact that He loves me and that I am one with Him. For most this is just an intellectual thing that's never known objectively.
My friend Dan, you are only partially accurate. Those are admirable and indeed lofty ideals and for sure God is happy with them.
However, God said, it is not good for the man to be alone, and therefore he created eve, to be his helpmate.
The highest form of KEDUSHA, holiness, is not you and God. NO!! The highest form of holiness is the manifestation of unity and ONENESS between a man and a woman, and specially, the love and intimacy between husband and wife…the loyalty, the growth, the passion, the giving to one another, all for the sake of shemayim…heaven…so, if this is the highest manifestation of kedusha, that means that you are to humble yourself my darling friend, because we are not angels and you are not perfection nor are any human, and condescend to love and give to your soulmate and add to her life and growth as you will both complete one another as soulmates…Please, read some of my poetry. I learned so much about holiness and love from my relationship with my late husband, Avraham Chaim…beleive me, there is nothing like the sweetness of a good relationship based upon the precepts and observance to God.
I wish this for you…
blessings
My friend Dan, you are only partially accurate. Those are admirable and indeed lofty ideals and for sure God is happy with them.
However, God said, it is not good for the man to be alone, and therefore he created eve, to be his helpmate.
**As Jesus has taught, the highest commandments are to love God and your neighbor as thyself. Those are the greatest commandments. Jesus has also said seek the kingdom first and all these things shall be added unto you. **
The highest form of KEDUSHA, holiness, is not you and God. NO!! The highest form of holiness is the manifestation of unity and ONENESS between a man and a woman,
**I notice that you can't give any scripture to back that up. God would never say the highest form of holyness is to get married, that is totally wrong. That might be the highest form of holyness in your mind, or maybe some scholar has said that. The highest honor is to serve God and others, that is the theme of all the stories of God's prophets. Their intense devotion to God. To have any priority other than God is to have an attachement. Attachments bind you to this realm, you worship what you love most, the most devotion should be for God.**
and specially, the love and intimacy between husband and wife…the loyalty, the growth, the passion, the giving to one another, all for the sake of shemayim…heaven…
**No one should ever do everything for the sake of heaven, that is selfish. It is common among those who are spiritually young, but it's something you should transcend. If someone is doing what's right because they want to get into heaven then they aren't ready. Devotion to God should be just out of love for Him, not because you're going to get something.**
NOPE, to love is to give…that means that if you truly love God then you will spend your life committed to someone…that is why God said it is not good for the man to be alone..THAT is the VERSE and the EVIDENCE is the first thing HE did was create EVE for ADAM>>
You pick and choose Dan, what suits you??? God forbid..Why do you suppose Dan that God first gave adam a wife??
HELLO? Because he already fulfilled what HE said was NO Good! For the man to be alone. It is a copout for you to say, oh, i won't commit to a wife because i am committed to JESUS>. JESUS aint GOD..
what you say now my friend is pure hogwash…God is the embodiement of a love relationship between a man and a woman, the way you love her, respect her, this is all GODLINESS IN MANIFESTATION…
God is the silent partner in the relationship between a husband and a wife, the force or NOT the force, depending on how one emulates God, and the one that you are RESPSONIBLE to: because that is the manifestation of your Godliness and observance to God or the lack of it..
Therefore when a man loves a woman and demonstrates giving and loving as God does, THAT is the highest compliment and service to God, since HE did create the woman for man!! And in specific the highest form of love….is intimacy with your WIFE….where your love for GOD and HIS CREATION, the woman that was created for man, is made manifest because that is the most responsible of ALL giving and loving, loving with commitment to another…… sorry……I guess you didn't know this……
YOU might be pleasantly pleased to know these things…they will strengthen you as a man, strengthen you as a Godly man, and expand your path of empowerment.
I wish this for you! everything else is full of baloney, but we pick and choose often huh?? and deceive ourselves, often ….hahha…
Ya know, here is what I see… not everything needs to be analyzed… and this is a ton of analysis on a poem that not only portrayed the relationship of man to God brilliantly, but that could have stood quietly on it’s own as a monument of the Eternal working THROUGH the author.
Shhhhh… everybody listen. God speaks in the quiet. Knowledge and analysis have their place. But the Eternal enlightens the “child”, not the scholar.
The poetry is brilliant work… an unfolding of what the “LOVE that is not human” actually feels like. I hope everyone gets a chance to experience it in this lifetime. I pray that actually…